3/30/09 Laney
Laney has a bad home because her mom ran away and her brothers are mean to her. There is a new girl at school and she is big. They had to put out a table so she could sit down.
Joey is mean to the new girl. Laney an here dad shear a room together.
her house is panted lime green.There is rusty old cars in the grass. the front porch steps is rotten.
so they go in the back. she walks home from school.
She wants to be in a play. she wants to be an actuator when she gets older.
.There i only one bath room. Her an her brothers don't get along good at all. Her brother skip school.
they fight in the bath room all the time an she dose the shopping
1/22/09persawed
i ould tell my main person in my book leaves a train crash. i think he should have stay there be cause he could have got found. first his parents got killed now this. i would be mad would you.
1/21/09 Mr. McGuire said
You need to log in your reading log every day! Also, if you are absent, you are still responsible for your online journal. You can always work on it at home to improve your grade.
Areas in red could be improved.
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Entries do not always have details from the book
Specific detail from book usually are on topic
One paragraph (2 - 4 sentences) each day
Detailed understanding of book demonstrated in journal
Format errors
Reading from SSR and home has missing days logged in book journal
Spelling, punctuation, and capitalization has mistakes
1/5/09 Two goals 09 is
1. to try a trick I have never tried be for It is a back flip but first I need to make my jump bigger.
2. to get good grades and get oner roll be for the year is up.
12/18/08 Major problem
The major problems Is Jeremy his mom and dad where shot by a mad man. they where trying to get out and he saw them so he shot them. he shot six people. then the cops came to his House and said I have bad news your mom and dad where shot.Then he went to live with his grandmother for a week. then he had to stay with his uncle Ed. then he went for a train ride and he dos off and the train stared to slow down and he said he awoke from sleep from scheming. The train cased.
12/15/08 how it went
it went very well. I got on my computer and printed it off . then my mom read it she liked it. she thinks it is a good idea.i like it to and you can get out what you want to say.
12/9/0Stone Fox
Two events that are important is little willy stared a race and stone fox stared in last place. also he keep gaining on little willy. they are nose and nose. there is three miles left.
12/8/08 stone fox
The main character is Little Willy. Little willy went to doc smith house. Grandfather need his medicine.
12/4/08 Trouble Solla sollew
I say that any where you go you will still have trouble. You might not have as much trouble but you will all ways have trouble.
12/3/08 TYLER PORTER SAID.....
Little Willy Said I have $50 dollars in my saving .The man said I am afraid that will not cover the taxes.Then Little willy ran down to the store.then he finds a poster that says dog race. Little willy ask if he can have it and the store person said yes.
12/3/08Taylor S. said
I just finished A Dog's Life and you might like it. You should read it because its a good story about a dog named Squirrel who gets hit by a car,who fights a pack of strays.It's amazing book.You can see everything in your head.Squirrel even tells the story!
1/17/08what do fish do with anything.
I predict that the end of my book is going to end like that Eve will find out who keeps calling her.
11/14/08 what do fish with anything
to day Eve found a sad guy. that is depress because his dad left when he was a kid. and no one likes him. an he owns a house and Eve is searing a piece of cake
11/13/08 main character
Is Eve after her cat died she was upset.
11/12/08 what do fish do with anything
what I read today that fish that live in caves do not have eyes.
11/11/08 Tyler ph,
he is about to lose the farm that is no good.
11/11/08The best part so far...
The best part so far is that little Willy is upset because he might lose the farm.
searchlight an little Willy had noticed the horse out tide up.
he hared a voice so little willy went to the house.
11/10/08 Five things that happened in the book
1. Little Willy was all most to grand father house.
2. When searchlight saw grand fathers house she ran fast as she could.
3. They Found out sings.
11/7/08 Mr. McGuire said
Can you imagine yourself as Little Willy?
11/6/08Stone Fox
Today I read Little Willy found out that grandfather was giving little willy signs. palm up meet yes palm down meet no. one finger meet I am hungry, two fingers meet I need water.
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3/30/09 Laney
Laney has a bad home because her mom ran away and her brothers are mean to her. There is a new girl at school and she is big. They had to put out a table so she could sit down.
Joey is mean to the new girl. Laney an here dad shear a room together.
her house is panted lime green.There is rusty old cars in the grass. the front porch steps is rotten.
so they go in the back. she walks home from school.
She wants to be in a play. she wants to be an actuator when she gets older.
.There i only one bath room. Her an her brothers don't get along good at all. Her brother skip school.
they fight in the bath room all the time an she dose the shopping
1/22/09persawed
i ould tell my main person in my book leaves a train crash. i think he should have stay there be cause he could have got found. first his parents got killed now this. i would be mad would you.
1/21/09 Mr. McGuire said
You need to log in your reading log every day! Also, if you are absent, you are still responsible for your online journal. You can always work on it at home to improve your grade.
Areas in red could be improved.
1 or D
1/5/09 Two goals 09 is
1. to try a trick I have never tried be for It is a back flip but first I need to make my jump bigger.
2. to get good grades and get oner roll be for the year is up.
12/18/08 Major problem
The major problems Is Jeremy his mom and dad where shot by a mad man. they where trying to get out and he saw them so he shot them. he shot six people. then the cops came to his House and said I have bad news your mom and dad where shot.Then he went to live with his grandmother for a week. then he had to stay with his uncle Ed. then he went for a train ride and he dos off and the train stared to slow down and he said he awoke from sleep from scheming. The train cased.
12/15/08 how it went
it went very well. I got on my computer and printed it off . then my mom read it she liked it. she thinks it is a good idea.i like it to and you can get out what you want to say.
12/9/0Stone Fox
Two events that are important is little willy stared a race and stone fox stared in last place. also he keep gaining on little willy. they are nose and nose. there is three miles left.
12/8/08 stone fox
The main character is Little Willy. Little willy went to doc smith house. Grandfather need his medicine.
12/4/08 Trouble Solla sollew
I say that any where you go you will still have trouble. You might not have as much trouble but you will all ways have trouble.
12/3/08 TYLER PORTER SAID.....
Little Willy Said I have $50 dollars in my saving .The man said I am afraid that will not cover the taxes.Then Little willy ran down to the store.then he finds a poster that says dog race. Little willy ask if he can have it and the store person said yes.
12/3/08Taylor S. said
I just finished A Dog's Life and you might like it. You should read it because its a good story about a dog named Squirrel who gets hit by a car,who fights a pack of strays.It's amazing book.You can see everything in your head.Squirrel even tells the story!
1/17/08what do fish do with anything.
I predict that the end of my book is going to end like that Eve will find out who keeps calling her.
11/14/08 what do fish with anything
to day Eve found a sad guy. that is depress because his dad left when he was a kid. and no one likes him. an he owns a house and Eve is searing a piece of cake
11/13/08 main character
Is Eve after her cat died she was upset.
11/12/08 what do fish do with anything
what I read today that fish that live in caves do not have eyes.
11/11/08 Tyler ph,
he is about to lose the farm that is no good.
11/11/08The best part so far...
The best part so far is that little Willy is upset because he might lose the farm.
searchlight an little Willy had noticed the horse out tide up.
he hared a voice so little willy went to the house.
11/10/08 Five things that happened in the book
1. Little Willy was all most to grand father house.
2. When searchlight saw grand fathers house she ran fast as she could.
3. They Found out sings.
11/7/08 Mr. McGuire said
Can you imagine yourself as Little Willy?
11/6/08 Stone Fox
Today I read Little Willy found out that grandfather was giving little willy signs. palm up meet yes palm down meet no. one finger meet I am hungry, two fingers meet I need water.
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